Main Task- Feedback

After recieving more feedback from my class I decided to make a few small changes to my front cover, contents page and double page spread. I then sent the improved versions to my friends to get some more feedback and see what else needed to be changed as I did not feel 100% confident with my work. Here is some of the feedback I found very useful:

'I think it looks really good J I like the front cover because its not too busy and you can see the pictures clearly and I really like the way you set out the contents page, I think it looks professional and the image used on the double page spread is really effective. J '

'The photography looks sophisticated and chic. I think the title font on the front cover and the title of the contents, looking scruffy relates to the young target audience well.  The style of the contents, having the writing down one side and the pictures down the other, is simple yet affective. The colour scheme of the whole magazine is bold, therefore it captures the eye of the potential buyer. The picture on the double page spread looks less professional but is very inventive. The separate images of the girl have not been cut out perfectly so this makes the image as a whole less effective. The magazine as a whole is consistent throughout and is mostly made to high standard.'